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Alfred Lee
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« on: August 24, 2012, 09:33:00 AM »

Hello everyone,

Take a look at my site and FB page, and give me some comments/ feedback on it, is there anything i need to improve.
Thanks 

Website: http://www.loonyballoons.com/about.html

FB: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Loony-Balloons/167411279961843?ref=hl

Twitter: https://twitter.com/loonyballoons
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« Reply #1 on: August 24, 2012, 12:22:25 PM »

Really great looking website!
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Alfred Lee
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« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2012, 05:11:23 PM »

Really great looking website!

Hi Tree,

Thanks. But sad to say, having a good looking site doesnt mean good business  Undecided
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« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2012, 11:42:02 AM »

Fantastic site! Here's some things I would do if it was mine:

-Make the characters on the main page clickable, linking to the characters page. Have actually photos of the characters on that page.
-Have a photos page to show off the sculptures, not just not decorations.

Other than that, it's one of the best looking twister pages I've seen.
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« Reply #4 on: September 05, 2012, 02:20:58 AM »

very nice website
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« Reply #5 on: September 05, 2012, 05:58:53 AM »

Nice looking website and you are obviously a very talented entertainer. There are a couple of typos in the introduction: "With 9 years of performing experiences, Alfred's passion for entertaining has made him one of the succesful performers in the Singapore." Should read:
"With nine years of performing EXPERIENCE, Alfred's passion for entertaining has made him one of the most successful performers in Singapore" Hope that helps.
All the best.
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Let's twist again, like we did last summer!
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« Reply #6 on: September 05, 2012, 04:34:31 PM »

Nice looking website and you are obviously a very talented entertainer. There are a couple of typos in the introduction: "With 9 years of performing experiences, Alfred's passion for entertaining has made him one of the succesful performers in the Singapore." Should read:
"With nine years of performing EXPERIENCE, Alfred's passion for entertaining has made him one of the most successful performers in Singapore" Hope that helps.
All the best.

Hello Arisuta,
Hahaha didnt realize the typos. Thank you so much Smiley
All the best to u too
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